For this new series, we are responding to the work of a particular 20th-century artist. Member Patricia A'Bear chose Paul Klee as the focus for this first quarterly challenge. We were free to concentrate on a single painting, or on his entire oeuvre.
Senecio, Paul Klee, oil paint on gauze, 1922 |
As the final assignment for the Jane Davies course Beyond the Colour Wheel, participants were asked to take the small, 3-colour collages we had made and "tile" them together. In other words, to take those 3" squares or rectangles and put them onto a grid, with no spaces between, just to see what they looked like arranged as a group. So my response to the 12 by the dozen challenge also met the criteria for the last assignment of my on-line course.
Patchwork, made of hand-dyed cotton, 16" x 16" |
In summary, I'd say that I like the original painting, I like the colours, I like the shapes, and I like the idea of a grid. But somehow, in my interpretation, the whole is less than the sum of its parts. I think that without the organizational structure of a recognizable face, the piece has no unity. It's a hot mess: it looks like it went through the blender. Klee's painting has a variety of small, medium and large shapes. My patchwork has only small and smaller. It's one thing to fulfill the requirements of a class assignment or a group challenge, but it's another thing to make good work.
Your thoughts?
1 comment:
I don't know about it being a hot mess, lol, it would be an awesome pillow. :) I do agree that it needs more sizes of pieces. Also, you could group the colors together a bit more, yet without just copying the painting. That might give it a better flow for the eye. I love your work, btw, and your blog is so very helpful!
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